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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 10:53 So 16.09.2007 | | Autor: | onur27 |
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Hallo Leute. Könnt ihr diesen Text bitte Korrigieren?
Simon is a boy living in tottenham. He doesn´t want to go to school. He doesn`t want learn somethink. He wants to play football. One day he plays football with his Sister. Simon kicks the ball against the window of the nabour. The window is defekt. The nabour MR: xy is very angry about that. And he wants to have 10 pounds. He doesn´t give the ball back.
Simon and his sister go to their parents and say that.
Their father gives them 10 pound and they go to the sportshop to buy a new ball.
They buy a ball. Simon reads: Made in India.
Thousend of kilometer distantly there is a girl . Her name is Sonia and she lives in Bangladesh.
She must work.She have to earn money for an english book. She wants to learn english.
She have to give the money to her mother.
Sonia must go 3 Kilometres every day to school.
They have got something together: Simon plays with the ball, which made by Sonia.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 11:05 So 16.09.2007 | | Autor: | Infinit |
Hallo onur27,
ich habe meine Tipps in Deinen Text eingefügt. Änderungen stehen hinter dem jeweiligen Wort. Die Beugung der Verben ist manchmal nicht okay.
Viele Grüße,
Infinit
> Bitte um Korrektur
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> # Ich habe diese Frage in keinem Forum auf anderen
> Internetseiten gestellt.
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> Hallo Leute. Könnt ihr diesen Text bitte Korrigieren?
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> Simon is a boy living in tottenhamn Tottenham . He doesn´t want to go
> to school. He doesn't want to learn somethink anything . He wants to
> play football. One day he plays football with his Sister sister .
> Simon kicks the ball against the window of the nabour neighbour . The
> window is defekt broken . The nabour neighbour MR: xy is very angry about
> that. And he wants to have 10 pounds. He doesn´t give the
> ball back.
> Simon and his sister go to their parents and say that.
> Their father gives them 10 pound and they go to the
> sportshop to buy a new ball.
> They buy a ball. Simon reads: Made in India.
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> Thousend of kilometer kilometers distantly away there is a girl . Her name
> is Sonia and she lives in Bangladesh.
> She must work.She have has to earn money for an english book.
> She wants to learn english English .
> She have has to give the money to her mother.
> Sonia must go 3 Kilometres every day to school.
>
> They have got something together: Simon plays with the
> ball, which was made by Sonia.
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>
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 11:19 So 16.09.2007 | | Autor: | onur27 |
They are very feeble to work and the children learn to know the hard faces of live very early.
. The children can´t live their childhood. They can´t play something . They have to work and
They have to earn money. They haven´t got freedom like the other rich children.
Hallo Danke schön für ihre Antwort! Können sie mal BITTE für mich nachschauen ob diese sätze da oben richtig sind?
Und wir haben als HA: aufbekommen: wie uns die englishe sprache auserhalb der schule genutzt hat(( auf english) wann und wo wir es benutzt haben. Aber leider weis ich nicht so viel über english bescheid :-(. Könnten sie mir bitte ein Kleines muster geben. Wie es ihnen Genützt HAT?
Danke im Vorraus
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 11:33 So 16.09.2007 | | Autor: | onur27 |
Hallo Sarah danke schön für deine Verbesserungen:
Kannst du bitte mal Nachschauen ob diese Sätze richtig sind:
If the children do not go to school, they can not learn something and later they can not be succesfull.
They are very feeble to work and the children learn to know the hard faces of live very early.
. The children can not live their childhood. They can not play something . They have to work and
They have to earn money. The children have not got freedom like the other rich children
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(Frage) beantwortet | | Datum: | 11:50 So 16.09.2007 | | Autor: | onur27 |
Oh sorry den Artikel habe ich übersehen!
Nett das du dir die Zeit nimmst und Korrigierst macht nicht jeder RESPEKT!
Danke schön schonmal im Vorraus für alle deine Antworten die du mir geben wirst(hoffe ich hehe) letzte frage noch das wars dann auch für Heute. Hoffe ich nerve dich nicht hehe!
English is a very good language. I used it in Turkey very much.
There are many tourists. Most of them can speak english , too!
English helps me, to communicate with people from all over the world. I watched films , which were in English.
I understood most of the words.
And I understood the themes of the films. Finally I want to say , that english is a very important language for people!
You can use it everywhere.
mfg
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Hey onur27 ![[winken]](/images/smileys/winken.gif "[winken]") ,
> English is a very good language. I have used it in Turkey very
> much. during my holidays.
> There are many tourists. Most of them can speak english ,
> too.
> The English language helps me, to communicate with people from all over
> the world. I watched films , which were in English. am able to watch films wich are in English and I am able to unterstand the plot.
> I understood most of the words.
> And I understood the themes of the films. Finally I want
> to say , that English is a very important language for
> people!
> You can use it everywhere.
Liebe Grüße,
Sarah 
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