Bürgerrechtsbewegung < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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Hallo, ich soll morgen in Englisch einen Vortrag über die Bürgerrechtsbewegung und Rosa Parks halten. Da Englisch nicht gerade zu meinen besten Fächern gehört, würde ich mich sehr freuen, wenn mir jemand den Vortrag korrigieren würde. Danke schonmal =)
1. Maybe you know, that people appraise in theirs colour of the skin, religion and rank. That´s not only in Germany but also in every countries of the world. In America was for example is it a big theme today, too. Black people were allowed to sit only in the back of the bus, actually the bus stops were apart in black and white. Black children were not allowed to go in the same school like white children and at the cinemas the black had only, if any, the bad seats.
I think, that it is an importantly theme, which dosn´t eclipse, but think about it. Therefore I would like to tell you something about Rosa Parks and the civil rights movement.
2. In general you understands below the civil rights movement a sozial action, which attempt, to accomplish the human- and civil rights of excluding or discriminating parts of the population. The civil rights movement in the USA, which is some of the famous, adopted for the equality of the Afro-Americans and the overcoming of the racism since the 20th century. Since the end of the American civil war 1865 the slavery were disestablished, nevertheless the Afro-American were eliminated in the south of the USA furthermore. The mighty were not only white, but they were convinced of that they are more worth as the Nigger, like they named the Afro-American.
The laws discriminated against the blacks. The people who were complained about this inequity must count on high penalties. White judges were censured black accused to hard penalties. And the so called Ku-Klux-Klan, a mightful association of white racists, were nor scared about to kill some of the black civil rights activists. There were laws, which affected all of the public equipments, among schools, universities, hospitals, public transportations, cinemas, etc. In 1896 the laws were accepted. The places for the Afro-American were always in a bad and not comfortable way like these of the white.
3. For 52 years, at the first December 1955, a brave, black woman has activated a revolution in the USA: Rosa Parks. Rosa Parks dosn´t think by herself, that she will be one of the famous civil rights activist as she dosn´t accommodate the seat for a white man. The seamstress 42-year-old at that time came exhausted after the work to a crowded bus. At a bus stop a white man came into the bus and dosn´t found a seat. Because the white people had more authorizations, the bus driver asked Rosa Parks to decontrol the seat, that the white man can sit there. But something marvellousness was happened: Rosa Parks was persist at the place.
My feet are hurt and I do not know, why I have to denied me to get up., she said some years later. During another interview she said:But the real reason was that I felt that I had a right to be treated like every other passenger! The law said at this time, nevertheless, something completely different. And therefore the white bus driver called the white police. Rosa Parks was arrested and jailed 4 days in the prison. On the 5th December she was convicted to a fine by a white judge because of indecent behaviour. Therefore Rosa Parks was the drop, which brought the barrel to overflowed. The news of the arrest spread like wildfire. There originated a black civil right movement which required the end of the racism and the final equal rights. The leader of this movement was Martin Luther King, but about this person Maria will tell you something. The peaceful opposition succeeded. Today the same laws count to the blacks and whites. But not all problems are still vanquished . In the heads of many white people , above all, in the south states of the USA the racism and the hate on Nigger has survived. Rosa Parks has stand up for the right of the blacks her whole life. In 1987 she founded the Rosa-und-Raymond-Parks-Institute which should help black youngsters to lead a self-certain life. For her lifelong application she received the most important awards of the USA. The president Bill Clinton at this time handed the freedom medallion in 1996 and the gold medal of the congress to Rosa Parks in 1999. She will always remain in the recollection of the blacks. It is called even today as The mother of the black civil right movement . In a song to her was dedicated one says: The world got up when Rosa Parks stayed down!
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1. Was ist Bürgerrechtsbewegung?
What is civil rights movement?
Social action
2. Wie ist die verächtliche Nennung von Afroamerikanern?
What is the naming of the Afro-American in an abject way?
Nigger
3. Eine mächtige Vereinigung weißer Rassisten
A mightful association of white racists
Ku-Klux-Klan
4. Eine der bekanntesten Bürgerrechtlerinnen
One of the most famous civil right avtivists
Rosa Parks
5. Warum wurde Rosa Parks verurteilt?
Why Rosa Parks was convicted?
indecent behavior
6. Was verlangte die Bürgerrechtsbewegung?
What the civil rights movement was called for?
the end of the racism and the final equal rights
7. Who was the leader of the civil rights movement?
Wer war der Anführer der Bürgerrechtsbewegung?
Martin Luther King
8. Was wurde 1987 gegründet?
What was founded in 1987?
Rosa-and-Raymond-Parks-Institute
und hier der deutsche text:
1. Wie ihr vielleicht wisst, werden Menschen heutzutage auch noch nach ihrer Hautfarbe, Religion und Stand beurteilt. Das ist nicht nur in Deutschland, sondern in fast allen Ländern der Fall. In Amerika war bzw. ist dies ein großes Thema. Schwarze durften im Bus nur hinten sitzen, sogar die Bushaltestelle wurde nach schwarz und weiß geteilt. Schwarze Kinder durften nicht in die gleiche Schule gehen und in den Kino´s bekamen die Schwarzen, wenn überhaupt, nur dich schlechtesten Plätze. Ich denke, dass es ein wichtiges Thema ist, welches man nicht in den Schatten stellen, sondern drüber nachdenken sollte. Deswegen möchte ich heute etwas über Rosa Parks und die Bürgerrechtsbewegung erzählen.
2. Im Allgemeinen versteht man unter Bürgerrechtsbewegung eine soziale Bewegung, die versucht, Menschen- und Bürgerrechte von ausgegrenzten oder diskriminierten Teilen der Bevölkerung durchzusetzen. Die Bürgerrechtsbewegung in den Vereinigten Staaten, welche wohl einer der bekanntesten ist, setzte sich seit dem 20. Jahrhundert für die Gleichberechtigung der Afroamerikaner und die Überwindung des Rassismus ein. Seit dem Ende des amerikanischen Bürgerkriegs 1865 war die Sklaverei zwar abgeschafft, dennoch blieben die Afroamerikaner in den Südstaaten weiterhin unterdrückt. Die Mächtigen im Staat waren nicht nur alle weiß, sondern sie waren auch überzeugt davon, dass sie mehr wert waren als die "Nigger", wie sie die Schwarzen verächtlich nannten. Das Gesetz in den Südstaaten diskriminierte (benachteiligte) die Schwarzen. Wer sich über diese Ungerechtigkeit beschwerte, der musste mit harten Strafen rechnen. Weiße Richter verurteilten schwarze Angeklagte zu harten Strafen. Und der so genannte Ku-Klux-Klan, eine mächtige Vereinigung weißer Rassisten, schreckte sogar vor brutalen Morden an schwarzen Bürgerrechtlern nicht zurück.
Es wurden Gesetze festgeschrieben, die alle öffentliche Einrichtungen betraf, darunter Schulen, Universitäten, Krankenhäuser, öffentliche Verkehrsmittel, Kino´s, usw. 1896 wurden diese Gesetze anerkannt. Die Einrichtungen für die Afroamerikaner waren immer schlechter und unkomfortabler als die der Weißen.
3. Vor 52 Jahren, am 1. Dezember 1955, hat eine mutige, schwarze Frau eine Revolution in den USA ausgelöst: Rosa Parks.
Rosa Parks hätte wohl selber nicht gedacht, dass sie mit der Weigerung, ihren Sitzplatz für einen Weißen zu räumen, zu einer der Bedeutendsten schwarzen Bürgerrechtlerinnen der USA wurde.
Die damals 42-jährige Näherin kam erschöpft nach der Arbeit in einen überfüllten Bus. An einer Haltestelle stieg ein weißer Mann dazu und fand keinen Platz mehr. Weil die weißen mehr Rechte hatten, forderte der Busfahrer Rosa Parks auf den Sitzplatz sofort zu räumen, damit der Weiße sich setzen konnte. Jedoch passierte dann etwas Undenkliches: Rosa Parks blieb sitzen. Mir taten die Füße weh und ich weiß nicht, warum ich mich geweigert haben aufzustehen., sagte sie viele Jahre später. In einem anderen Interview sagte sie: Aber der eigentliche Grund war, dass ich spürte, dass ich ein Recht hatte, wie jeder andere Fahrgast behandelt zu werden! Das Gesetz sagte in dieser Zeit jedoch etwas völlig anderes. Und somit rief der weiße Busfahrer die weiße Polizei. Rosa Parks wurde verhaftet und musste 4 Tage im Gefängnis absitzen. Am 5. Dezember wurde sie von einem weißen Richter wegen Erregung öffentlichen Ärgernisses zu einer Geldstrafe verurteilt.
Rosa Parks war somit der Tropfen, der das Fass zum überlaufen brachte. Die Nachricht der Verhaftung verbreitete sich wie ein Lauffeuer. Es entstand eine schwarze Bürgerrechtsbewegung, die das Ende des Rassismus und die endgültige Gleichberechtigung verlangte. Der Anführer dieser Bewegung war Martin Luther King, aber über diese Person wird euch Maria noch einiges erzählen. Der friedliche Widerstand hatte Erfolg. Heute gelten die gleichen Gesetze für Schwarze und Weiße. Dennoch sind nicht alle Probleme besiegt. In den Köpfen vieler weißer Menschen vor allem in den Südstaaten der USA hat der Rassismus und der Hass auf die Nigger überlebt.
Rosa Parks setzte sich ihr ganzes Leben für die Rechte der Schwarzen ein. 1987 gründete sie das Rosa-und-Raymond-Parks-Institut, welches schwarzen Jugendlichen helfen soll, ein selbst bestimmtes Leben zu führen. Für ihren lebenslangen Einsatz erhielt sie die wichtigsten Auszeichnungen der USA. Der damalige Präsident Bill Clinton überreichte ihr 1996 die Freiheitsmedaille und 1999 die Goldmedaille des Kongresses. Sie wird immer in der Erinnerung der Schwarzen bleiben. Sie wird heute noch als Mutter der schwarzen Bürgerrechtsbewegung bezeichnet. In einem Song der ihr gewidmet wurde heißt es: Die Welt stand auf, als Rosa Parks sitzen blieb!
Ich habe diese Frage in keinem Forum auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 19:34 So 04.11.2007 | | Autor: | Tenisha |
. You might know, that people appraise in their colour of skin, religion and rank. Not only in Germany but also in every country of the world. In America for example it is a big theme today, too. Black people were allowed to sit only in the back of the bus, actually the bus stops were seperated into black and white people. Black children were not allowed to go in the same school like white children and at the cinemas the black had only, if any, the bad seats.
I think, that it is an important subject, which dosn´t (eclipse) ? (what are you trying to say), but think about it. Therefore, I would like to tell you something about Rosa Parks and the Civil Rights movement.
2. In general you understand below the Civil Rights movement was a social action, which attempts, to accomplish the human- and civil rights of excluding or discriminating parts of the population. The Civil Rights movement in the USA, which is some of the famous, adopted for the equality of the Afro-Americans and the overcoming of the racism since the 20th century. Since the end of the American Civil War 1865 the slavery was (disestablished)??, nevertheless the Afro-American were eliminated in the south of the USA furthermore. The mighty were not only white, but they were convinced that they were more worth then Niggers, as they called the Afro-Americans.
The laws discriminated against the blacks. The people who complained about this inequity must count on high penalties. White judges were censured black accused to hard penalties. And the so called Ku-Klux-Klan, a mightful association of white racists, were nor scared to kill some of the black civil rights activists. There were laws, which affected all of the public, among schools, universities, hospitals, public transportations, cinemas, etc. In 1896 the laws were accepted. The places for the Afro-Americans were always bad and not comfortable way like these of the white.
3. For 52 years, on the first of December 1955, a brave, black woman activated a revolution in the USA: Her name was Rosa Parks. Rosa Parks doesn´t think by herself that she will be one of the famous civil rights activist as she doesn´t accommodate the seat for a white man. The seamstress a 42-year-old at that time was exhausted after e work to a crowded bus. At a bus stop a white man came into the bus and didn't find a seat. Because the white people had more authorizations, the bus driver asked Rosa Parks to get up from the seat so that the white man can sit there. But something marvellous was about to happen: Rosa Parks was persistant and stayed in her seat.
My feet were hurting and I did not understand why I had to be denied this seat., she said some years later. During another interview she said:But the real reason was that I felt that I had a right to be treated like every other passenger! The law said at this time, nevertheless, something completely different. And therefore the white bus driver called the white police. Rosa Parks was arrested and put into prison for 4 days. On the 5th of December she was convicted to a fine by a white judge because of indecent behaviour. Therefore Rosa Parks was the (rain)?drop, which brought the barrel to overflow. The news of the arrest spread like wildfire. There originated a black civil right movement which required the end of the racism and the final equal rights. The leader of this movement was Martin Luther King, but about this person Maria will tell you something. The peaceful opposition succeeded. Today the same laws count to the blacks and whites. But not all problems have vanished . In the heads of many white people , above all, in the south states of the USA the racism and the hate on Nigger has survived. Rosa Parks has stood up for the rights of the blacks her whole life. In 1987 she founded the Rosa-und-Raymond-Parks-Institute which should help black youngsters to lead a self-certain life. For her life long application she received the most important awards of the USA. President Bill Clinton at this time handed the freedom medallion in 1996 and the gold medal of the congress to Rosa Parks in 1999. She will always remain in the recollection of the blacks. She is called even today The mother of the black civil right movement . In a song which was dedicated to her one says: The world got up when Rosa Parks stayed down!
I corrected as much as I could without changing the whole text.
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Hallo Prinschipezza,
Es ist ja löblich, dass du dir die viele Mühe machst die ganzen Wörter rauszusuchen,- jedoch kann es nicht sein, dass du diese dann verwendest ohne den Kontext zu kennen (nicht die Wörter, die am besten klingen sind die richtigen!). Warum suchst du dir den nicht eine englische Vorlage im I-net zu Rosa Parks(gibt es doch massig) und fasst diese dann einfach zusammen, anstatt einen deutschen Text zu schreiben und den dann zu übersetzen, was m.E. meistens schief geht. Ich habe mir die Mühe gemacht deinen deutschen Text zu übersetzen (Ausnahme: Der bei 3. gekennzeichnete Abschnitt),weil in deinem eigenen Text zu viele Fehler waren, als dass ich diese hätte so berichtigen können. Ich hoffe du lernst daraus.
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As you perhaps know, even nowadays a lot of people are judged by the colour of their skin, their religion and their class. ~That happens not only in Germany but in almost all other countries in the world as well. In America f.e.(=for example), this was and even still is a big theme. Formerly, black people were only allowed to sit in the back of the buses, even at the bus stops there were separated areas for black and white people. Furthermore, black children were not allowed to attend the same schools as white (ones) and at the cinemas the blacks got if at all- only the worst seats.
I think that discrimination (against certain groups) is a very important theme which should not be ignored but openly discussed. That is why I want to tell you today about Rosa Parks and the Civil Rights Movement.
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Generally speaking a civil rights movement is a social movement, attempting to assert the human and civil rights of excluded or discriminated parts of the society. The Civil Rights Movement in the USA, which is perhaps one of the most famous, stood up for equality between black and white people and the overcoming of racism (in general). Since the end of the American Civil War in 1865 slavery was officially abolished, nevertheless the Afro-Americans were still oppressed in the Southern States. All men in power were white and convinced of the idea that they themselves were superior(=überlegen) to the Niggers, as they were disdainfully called. Moreover, the black people in the Southern States were discriminated against by the law. If a black person complained about whatever inequity, he could be sure to be sentenced to a hard punishment by the white judges. The so called Ku-Klux-Klan, an association of white racists, did not even shrink away from murdering (certain) civil-rights activists. In 1896 laws concerning all public facilities, among those schools, universities, hospitals, public transport, cinemas, etc. were passed. As a consequence of all of them the facilities for black people were always worse than the ones for whites.
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The fuel that lit the fire came on the evening of December 1, 1955, when a seamstress and former NAACP secretary named Rosa Parks boarded the Cleveland Avenue bus in downtown Montgomery. When the white bus driver asked the blacks that were sitting in the segregated part to move to accommodate more whites, everyone complied except for Parks. Parks took a stand and refused to get up. Minutes later she was arrested and sent to a Montgomery jail.[quote from http://home.att.net/~reniqua/what.html]
A black civil rights movement was initiated demanding the end of racism and final equality. The leader of that movement was M.L. King Jr. about whom Marian is going to tell you later on. The peaceful resistance was successful. Today there are the same valid laws for both, black people and white people. Nevertheless, not all problems have been solved. In a lot of peoples minds - especially in those of the people in the Southern States racism and hate against Niggers have survived.
Throughout her whole life, Rosa Parks stood up for the rights of black people. In 1987 she founded the Rosa-& Raymond-Parks-Institute, which is meant to help black teenagers lead an independent life. For her lifelong commitment she was awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom in 1996 by Bill Clinton and the Congressional Gold Medal in 1999. She will forever be part of the black peoples remembrance. She is even today called Mother of the Black Civil Rights Movement. In a song dedicated to her, it says: When Momma Parks sat down, The whole world stood up
.[quote fromhttp://www.traditionalmusic.co.uk/folk-song-lyrics/Ballad_of_Momma_Rosa_Parks.htm]
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