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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 22:18 Do 23.04.2009 | | Autor: | cheezy |
| Aufgabe | No Happy Ending
30 years ago there was born a young boy called „Mahatma“. He had lived 10 years in a Slum near Calcutta. When he was eleven years old he had got a job in a restaurant in Mumbai. After 8 years the owner of the Restaurant had a car accident and Mahatma was the new chef of the restaurant. As time drew on he became rich. On a sunny day, he decided to go in a zoo. Then he saw a beautiful woman sitting on a bench. He went to her without shy and he asked: “ Where are you from?”. Then she answered happily, that she comes from Thailand. After few seconds the man asked, if she want a date with him. On their first date they went to a Spicy Food Restaurant and after the eating, they went to Taj Mahal. When they arrived there, they watched the moon and telling storys to each other. Finally they fell in Love and Mahatma rent a flat for her. After 3 years a good friend called “Erik” said to her, that he had a Bollywood-Studio in India and he need some actors to be famous. Then she left Mahatma and the relationship was broken. She went to Erik and worked many years as a actor. After many years she was so popular, that her movies was shown on the TV. When she was 30 years old, she died on AIDS.
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Hi Liebes Forum
Kann mir bitte jemand meinen Aufsatz auf Fehler überprüfen?
Danke
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 02:20 Fr 24.04.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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